Đề bài: In the past many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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A recent and common viewpoint agrees that male dominance in leadership has often resulted in chaotic results and hence, it is more peaceful if women take the lead. However, I personally disagree with such a suggestion and my explanations will be expressed in this essay.
The initial reason why I believe men can exercise more decent leadership is that they are less affected by emotion. In fact, scientists believe that male’s emotional cortex is less active, therefore they are hardwired to mental stability, leading to the ability to make more rational decisions. Women leaders, on the other hand, have expressed evident tendencies where their own emotional instability compromised leadership. Take the current series of US presidential debates as an example, in which male candidates build arguments on regulations, while female opponents tilted significantly towards raising awareness on aggressive language towards fellow females professionals and themselves, which is an indicator of emotions taking control.
In accompany with the said arguments, it can also be pointed out that the female’s physical limits in stress coping capacity acts as a deterrent for them to succeed at leadership positions. Biologically speaking, women’s physical capacity for stress endurance has been proven to be not as good as their male counterparts. Therefore, prolonged and challenging situations, which are a normal feature for any leadership role, demand equally persistent cognitive clarity that the female physicality is rarely able to handle. To be more specific, men often outnumber women in leadership positions which require the superior stress dealing physicality such as CEO or hedge fund manager. Also, it is an undeniable fact that during mankind’s history, the majority of leaders during chaotic periods are often men like George Washington or Winston Churchill.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the role of leadership should be more suitable for men as they are more logical at decision making and more resilient in coping with high and long tension.
(Mr. Nghĩa Vũ)
chaotic (a) hỗn loạn
hence (av) = because of that : vì thế
exercise (v) = do = thực hiện
decent (a) khá khẩm
rational (a) duy lý
instability (n) không ổn định
compromise (v) hạ thấp tiêu chuẩn
tilt (v) nghiêng
aggressive (a) thô bạo
indicator (n) dấu hiệu
deterrent (n) yếu tố cản trở
persistent (a) kiên trì
cognitive (a) clarity (n) sự minh mẫn
hedge (n) fund (n) quỹ đầu tư
resilient (a) bền bỉ
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